在準(zhǔn)備雅思寫(xiě)作時(shí)，借鑒雅思作文范文：高分思路參考是提升答題深度的有效方法。以2021年11月11日的這道真題為例，它探討了醫(yī)生、教師等專業(yè)人士是否應(yīng)比體育娛樂(lè)從業(yè)者獲得更高薪酬。盡管前者對(duì)社會(huì)的基礎(chǔ)運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)貢獻(xiàn)顯著，但我認(rèn)為，簡(jiǎn)單地跨行業(yè)比較薪資并不合理。
解析
老題新出，之前有過(guò)題目單討論運(yùn)動(dòng)員是否應(yīng)該獲得高薪資。本題需要注意前后兩個(gè)群體的對(duì)比，從兩者的異同點(diǎn)進(jìn)行比較。整體思路：不同意。都是社會(huì)分工下正常的職業(yè)，應(yīng)該按個(gè)人在所在領(lǐng)域的貢獻(xiàn)和能力配比工資，而不是領(lǐng)域間進(jìn)行整體工資比較。
? professional n. 專業(yè)人士，專家（如醫(yī)生、律師等）
? aforementioned adj. 前面提到的
? deserve vt. 值得
Body 1
Irrefutably, workers with expertise do guarantee the basic survival of the public and conduce to the social soundness. Knowledgeable teachers, having made every effort torefinetheir knowledge and obtain relevant qualification,impartboth theories and moral valuestoyounger generations, which thusnurturesstudents into talents andinjects vitality intoall walks of life to ensure fundamental social development. Hospital staff, be they doctors or nurses,negotiate every impedimentto save people’s lives by researching non-stop remedies and therapies or even sometimes risking their own lives. So many touching stories about them have been reported via media and even edited into documentaries during the impacts of COVID-19. Affirming their efforts and contributions, government has already issued certain policies to subsidize workers in those domains.
承認(rèn)專業(yè)人士對(duì)社會(huì)的貢獻(xiàn)（保障基本民生）以及這些群體可能面臨的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。
? refine vt. 提煉
? impart sth. to sb. 給予某人某物（常跟抽象名詞）
? nurture vt. 培養(yǎng)
? inject vitality into 注入活力
? negotiate every impediment 披荊斬棘
Body 2
However, I would also like to highlight that celebrities in sports and entertainment in fact play an equally essential role in another way. To illustrate, some may argue that it is unfair for sportsmen to be better paid, since they do not provide vital services. Football players, for example, earn enormous salaries by simply kicking a ball. However, such arguments canhold no water, as sports stars not only have dedicated hours of practice to developing their fitness and skills and often struggle withirreversiblediseases in their later life but also have raised the fame of their nations by standing out in international games like Olympics. Regarding stars in entertainment, it is their works – movies, shows, or songs – thatspice uppeople’s life especially during the period oflockdown, thus satisfying viewers’ spiritual demands.
指出運(yùn)動(dòng)員和娛樂(lè)明星對(duì)社會(huì)的貢獻(xiàn)（滿足精神需求）以及面臨的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。
? hold no water 站不住腳
? irreversible adj. 不可逆的；不可治愈的
? spice up v. 增添趣味
? lockdown n. 封城
總而言之，無(wú)論是專業(yè)人士還是文體明星的貢獻(xiàn)都值得尊重。這份雅思作文范文：高分思路參考最終指向一個(gè)結(jié)論：薪資應(yīng)基于個(gè)人在自身領(lǐng)域內(nèi)的表現(xiàn)與貢獻(xiàn)來(lái)衡量，而非對(duì)不同職業(yè)進(jìn)行整體性的價(jià)值排序，這才是社會(huì)分工背景下更公平合理的薪酬邏輯。
